I agree with firstname.lastname@example.org that you should cut down and re-arrange the text in the beginning, but I would go even further. It should be:
FROM THE DARK SIDE OF THE MOON
Reference to “badass” isn’t necessary. She’s throwing a hammer. Show, don’t tell.
I would even consider dropping FROM THE DARK SIDE OF THE MOON. It’s confusing and doesn’t go anywhere.
The text as she’s sitting in the chair is a bit hard to read because of the background. I would darken and blur the right hand of the screen just a bit, so the text stands out more. It also looks like the text might not be 100% opaque though that may be because it’s so thin. I like the style. Wouldn’t change that or make the letters thicker, just play with the background to make it pop.
The text fades may be a bit too slow. I’d try speeding them up by 25%.
Wish there was more action. A shot or two of her running around would help especially if it meant seeing less of her just sitting in the chair.